luvin
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Post by luvin on Mar 12, 2007 0:39:09 GMT 8
Hey Guys... Managed to feel the mood of where this shot took place... and decided to shoot in B&W... brudder low lights.. its not B + W ah... Enjoy guys...     This last image was the place we were shooting... Cheers |
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Post by luvin on Mar 12, 2007 0:40:08 GMT 8
Oh... forgot to mention...
No PS done on it yet.. just straight up..
Cheers
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Post by gilbertgoh on Mar 12, 2007 0:50:32 GMT 8
bro,
just some comments, mpov,
1&3 you should keep the nose in the face and show both eyes.
1, i feel that more fill flash would be better, the shadow very hash.
4, after shooting my gf a few times, i feel that gals are not nice when they are taken point blank.
my fav is 3, reason is because there are catch lights in her eyes that makes her alive. very nice feel.
just my 2 cents, i am be wrong, dun be angry or offended.
Cheers bro, nice work over all
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luvin
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Post by luvin on Mar 12, 2007 0:57:54 GMT 8
Thanks Gilbert...
Ok.. funny thing is... in my Cam LCD.. her face looks very brightened up .... that's why I left it and did not attempt another shot....
But... no worries... have to work on "feel and intuition"
Cheers
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Post by 28degree on Mar 12, 2007 8:52:43 GMT 8
i like #2.... i like all the hair motion that is being captured....she must have got nice hair..... somehow i seem to feel that her eyes lack soul in it...hehe somewhat hollow bah....maybe only i feel it that way...  and yah..maybe can crop off a bit of the right side of #2 to remove that nail |
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Post by evershine on Mar 21, 2007 22:00:48 GMT 8
These shots do not have wow factor. Guess I seen too many photos on her world and photography magazines and compare yours to them.
#4 - pose is no good, your aperture may not have set correctly.. the bokeh is not there.. or your focus is out
#2 - is ok to me but the nail on the wall spoils it.
#1 - her face and eyes cannot see
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