manda
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Post by manda on May 8, 2007 20:37:30 GMT 8
Thanks to all for viewing my 'studio' post - unfortunately I since deleted all my RAW images - groan. I immediately signed myself up for another shoot, this one outside. PPls comments were v helpful last time, so pls C&C. #1 The most natural processing ...  # 2 Tried 'soot & whitewash effects'.  # 3 The worst of the batch. I've overblown the skin (again). If any one can tell me what I am doing wrong ...  |
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USM
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Post by USM on May 8, 2007 21:46:43 GMT 8
#1 The most natural processing ... Manda, somehow the pertrusion of the left shoulder onto her face didn't work out very well. You may want to lower her left shoulder so that we can see the whole face. Oops.... late for night macro field trip ..... catch up again.  |
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Post by evershine on May 8, 2007 21:51:11 GMT 8
#1 her shoulder is 'cutting' into her face. Look a bit odd. Quite a fair bit of stray hairs.
#2 I like this one. Her sitting position a bit odd - seem as though she is supporting herself. Perhaps better if she fold her arms instead. On the right side of her head some stray hairs.
#3 Its not bad. I guess its the metering you use. Perhaps you can shoot 2 or 3 of the same with different exposure settings to play safe.
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luvin
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Post by luvin on May 8, 2007 22:01:54 GMT 8
Hi Manda... Missed u at Modellin's shoot... Christine was a nice model hey...  Love the effect u got for #2.... that helo effect around the model... gives it a nice effect... As for #3... the lighting area around her neck region.. .is causing my eye... to "loose" the neck line... watch for that... Cheers |
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manda
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Post by manda on May 9, 2007 17:24:21 GMT 8
Thanks so much for all ur comments.
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