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Post by cattitude on Jun 12, 2007 21:59:23 GMT 8
Hi Did this over the weekends. my first portrait shoot for my new DSLR. Would like to hear from you. #1 #2 Thanks for viewing.
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cecil
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Post by cecil on Jun 12, 2007 22:34:15 GMT 8
nice
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Post by lowlights on Jun 13, 2007 0:06:18 GMT 8
Model face seems abit soft But I like the red and white color contrast..
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USM
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Post by USM on Jun 13, 2007 0:25:31 GMT 8
I do agree with lowlights that the red and white created nice contrast. However, I find that the shots are too tight especially the 3rd photo. Give a bit more space.
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Post by evershine on Jun 13, 2007 12:46:42 GMT 8
Good try. Overall is quite nicely done. Saw your entire series at multiply. The jpeg quality maybe too compressed and one shot at F/4 and one of them at iso800. And one of the them shutter speed at 1/25 so prone to handshake.
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Post by cattitude on Jun 13, 2007 19:27:21 GMT 8
Good try. Overall is quite nicely done. Saw your entire series at multiply. The jpeg quality maybe too compressed and one shot at F/4 and one of them at iso800. And one of the them shutter speed at 1/25 so prone to handshake. ISO 800 due to indoor, not enuff light. I just play with shutter speed and did not really check on it. but do notice handshake blur. thanks
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manda
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Post by manda on Jun 23, 2007 12:03:59 GMT 8
like the constrast of red and white
# 2 is my fav
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Marcus
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Post by Marcus on Jun 23, 2007 21:47:04 GMT 8
Image abit soft..
1st image the inter leg look dark.
Girl wearing white with a total white BG cos the top of outer leg and bottom of the inter leg to look weird. Weird as in the white color wearing almost look like the BG.
Lighting not tat balance on left and right: Notice the color at the left is brighter couse shadow on the right side of outer hand.
2nd image shadow between the eyes if u notice. shadow between the armpit.
Becos of the floor is Red color so the girl wearing also look redish. Overcome by custom white balance.
shadow can be overcome by lighting. (studio lighting maybe) heehee
No offence. Dun think there is anyone can produce good result without those expensive studio equipment....
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Post by gilbertgoh on Aug 8, 2007 11:18:52 GMT 8
i dun know it may be me only, but i think lady are not meant to be taken straight up front.
for the first shot, i do think it is better for you place the lady closer to the wall and lower your angle and level to as close to ground level as possible. the lady could be place at an angle where the shoes would be in the red area( floor) and the body in the white area (wall)
composing for the shot should give you a nice line leading into the pic to the lady and out.
lol this is only my option. hehehe still nice shots! thumps up and shoot more.
it would provide a nice line
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